I'll leave the hair critiques to the professionals. Me, I'll just comment on the beauty of the model, the lighting, the alabaster skin, amazing shoulders and chest and look forward to seeing the rest of this series. Nice work. She's a natural.
Yes I do agree about the hair across her lip, but sadly the other images from this series that did not have it her hand is not blocking the underwear and wanted to keep this image more inviting that revealing.
Oh no worries I did not take the comment in anyway bad, you and soluscado pointed out a very good point and I do agree...I will post one of the other images from the series once the model has the chance to proof the final image and gives an OK..
As much as I love the photo, I think her hair falling across her face is a BIT distracting... It frames her lips too much and makes it look like facial hair. I realize how difficult it is to catch such details on shoots like this, and I doubt everyone (or even most) will notice... but I did.